Liz's Progressive Novel
Yeah, I don't like that name either so you need to help me think of another one.
Thank you so much for your wonderful suggestions for Chapter 2. I hope you will be pleased. I was able to integrate many of your suggestions.
PLEASE keep the comments coming. Chapter 3 needs some of your marvelous input. Should the obvious happen, or do you want it to go in a totally different direction. You will know what I mean after you read Chapter 2.
I'm also thinking that Emma needs a tattoo. What do you think? What and where should it placed?
Any other suggestions?
It was necessary to do a little bit of re-writes on Chapter 1. That's why it's included below.
As always, let me put a disclaimer in here.
1. I have no idea if this is going to work.
2. This will be raw and unedited. You will see all my ticks and flaws that drive my editors crazy!
3. See #2. This can't be stressed enough.
4. I reserve the right to re-write any previous parts if needed.
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This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, business, places, events and incidents are either the product of the author’s imagination or used in a fictitious manner. Any resemblance to actual persons, living or dead, or actual events is purely coincidental.
No part of this book may be reproduced or transmitted in any form or by any means, electronic or mechanical, including photocopying and recording, or by any information storage or retrieval system, currently known or future inventions except as may be expressly permitted in writing from lizabeth@LizabethScottBooks.comCHAPTER ONE-revised
Emma
Matthews stood proudly on the deck of the Shark Tracker as she navigated the
waters back to the dock after a successful tagging. Her sun streaked brown hair
flew behind her in the breeze as the boat rose and dipped with each wave. Dark
sunglasses shielded her hazel eyes from the beating sun. A strong wave sprayed
her face. Emma laughed and whipped off her glasses. She was never happier than
when she was flying across the blue sea.
Behind
her she could hear the conversation of her co-workers which was still focused
on the fourteen footer they had tagged that day. It had been an exceptional tag
and Emma couldn’t wait to get back to her office and begin entering the data
they had gathered and begin tracking the great white they had named Mary Beth.
Jeff would take the biology samples back to the lab and begin running
diagnostics on them. Soon, they would know all the secrets of Mary Beth and
would be able to track her movement.
“Hey
Em, do you think MB’s heading north?”
“That
would be my guess, this early in the season.” As a marine biologist Emma knew
shark patterns this time of the year headed north. One of the exciting parts of
her job was when a shark varied from the norm and went rogue. You’ve never seen
a group of scientist more excited than when a deviated pattern was noted.
Emma
turned back around and lowered her speed as the dock drew near. She cut the
engine and drifted in the last few feet before pushing the button to lower
anchor. Paul was already on the dock tying her down. Emma picked up her bag and
cases. Paul would close the boat for the day.
“See
you guys tomorrow. Five sharp.” Emma waved at the groaning group and sailed
past Paul and the guys with her head already running the data pattern she
planned to use for Mary Beth.
Once
in her office she sat her things down and powered up her computers. While she
waited for them to come on she put a pot of tea on and changed from her one
piece bathing suit to a T-shirt and cut-off blue jeans shorts. That was the
wonderful convenience of working from home. Emma’s office was the open sea or
in her one bedroom cottage overlooking the ocean. Sometimes she was required to
be onsite at the lab or training facility.
Just
as she was tucking in to work her phone rang. After checking the display she
grimaced before she pushed the button to answer.
“Hi
mother,” always mother, never mom. Emma put her mother on speaker phone and
opened her Shark Tracker program. She had learned long ago it was best to only
listen with half an ear. Neither of her parents approved of her career choice,
her mother especially. Her mother would have been happy if she had married well
and had already produced two point five offspring.
“Emmaline,
seven o’clock sharp tonight, and wear a dress. Not one of those awful
sundresses of yours either, a cocktail dress, preferably black. You know how your
skin looks all mottled with those garish colors you insist on wearing. And do
something to that hair of yours. I wish you would let me make you an
appointment with my stylist. She could tame that wild hair of yours into some
semblance of order. You get that from your father’s side you know.”
“Yes
mother.” Emma said and then popped her head up from her computer and ran her
mother’s conversation back through her mind, “I mean no mother, I will fix my
own hair, but thank you for offering.” Emma answered politely.
“And
Emmaline, wear make-up, you simply must cover that sun damage on your face. Why
you think a tanned face is acceptable is beyond me. You should be taking care
of your skin at your age you can’t be too careful.”
Emma
propped her elbows on her desk and dropped her head into them. She was only
thirty years old, and always used sunblock on her face and body, and reapplied
often. People said her skin looked sun-kissed and healthy. She couldn’t help it,
she spent the majority of her day outside, and mostly on the water. That was,
after all, where the sharks she caught and tagged were.
But
of course, her mother didn’t really understand her job and she wanted to keep
it that way. “Yes, mother I will be there on time. I promise.” Her mother
thought she worked at an aquarium, and Emma would do nothing to dissuade her
from that misassumption.
“Very
well, be sure that you are. You know your father doesn’t like to be kept
waiting. I will send the car for you at six fifteen.”
“Yes
mother.” Her father could care less if she was five minutes late. Her mother
however would have a cow. Emma would admit that she did have time issues, but
she had never been late to her parent’s dinners. Well, not very late. Expect
for that one time and then she was extremely late. That however, had been the
sharks fault not hers and had required fifteen stitches in her leg, which her
parents never knew about and never would.
Emma
told her mother good-bye and hung up wondering who was on the menu tonight.
Once a month her parents would invite her to dinner and just happen to have
invited a pre-vetted single male candidate for her dating pleasure. Her mother
always sent the limousine to pick her up, so said candidate could take her home.
To date, no one her mother had chosen as acceptable even registered on Emma’s hotness
scale.
At
precisely seven o’clock that evening Emma, in her black above the knee cocktail
dress walked into her parent’s foyer. She stopped to smell the roses, literally
on the round marble table under the massive chandelier hanging two stories
above. She could hear everyone in the back parlor but she took her time
enjoying the flowers and sticking her head in the kitchen to tell Sally and
Maude hello before she walked through the grand French doors and greeted her parents.
“Hey
Daddy.” Her father wrapped her in a hug.
“How’s
my little girl?” Her dad gave her a kiss on the cheek.
“I’m
fine we had an exciting day at work.” Her father had a better understanding of
her work but he still had no idea of the extent of her involvement.
“There
she is.” Emma turned at her mother’s greeting.
“Stewart,
this is our daughter Emmaline. Emmaline this is a friend of your fathers,
Stewart Rawleigh.” Her mother literally preened over the introduction as she
picked invisible lint from Emma’s dress.
“It’s
a pleasure to meet you Mr. Rawleigh.” Emma said as she shook his hand politely
before cutting her eyes towards her mother. Surely her mother wasn’t seriously
entertaining the idea that Mr. Stewart Rawleigh was candidate material. He had
to be close to her dad’s age.
“Stewart,
please Emmaline.” He said as he clasped Emma’s small hand in his large, cold,
and clammy hand.
Emma
smiled uncomfortably as his eyes roved her body stopping way too long on her
breasts. She tried to politely remove her hand from his but he held tightly,
“Stewart, and please call me Emma.” A shiver ran through her and it wasn’t a
good shiver.
“Why
don’t you children run along and get to know each other before dinner is
announced. The roses are lovely this time of year, Emmaline would be more than
happy to show you Stewart.”
Emma’s
could tell her mother was very pleased with herself. Without causing a scene
she accompanied Stewart to the garden, and for the remainder of the night
played twister getting away from his grouping hands. There was no way she was
letting Stewart take her home.
Two
hours later Emma sat in the back of Stewart’s limousine steaming mad. Her
mother had insisted she allow Mr. Pawsy to take her home. Her feet hurt from the
ridiculous shoes she had worn to please her mother, she had a headache due to
the riveting conversation she had been made to endure throughout dinner and
now, she was stuck in the back of a car with a very unwanted hand on her knee
for the fifth time.
She
had had enough. “Stewart,” she said sweetly. “If you don’t remove your hand
from my knee, I will remove it for you and I can’t promise your fingers will be
in the same condition they are now?” Emma said sweetly, but with a determined
glint in her eye.
“Oh
now, Emma,” Stewart patted her on the knee, “we are just getting to know each
other. Your folks are real happy we’re going to start seeing each other.” His
hand on her knee began to more up her thigh.
Emma
brushed his hand off her leg and demanded, “What?” He had to be delusional if
he thought she wanted to see him again. Once was more than enough.
Stewart
put his arm around Emma’s shoulders and pulled her close into his side. “I told
your mother your age didn’t bother me at all.”
“My
age. Wha…” Emma was too stunned to move away. He really thought she was too old
for him? He had to be at least twenty years older than her.
“We’ll
date and get to know each other, and well, you know, take things for a test
drive,” he gave her shoulder a squeeze, and winked at her before he continued,
“and then we’ll get married in a month or two.”
“Married…”
Emma looked around the limousine for a camera. This had to be a joke. The guys
at work at to be in on this.
“I’m
sure you want kids right off before your eggs dry up. Your mother said she
would only need a month to get a shindig ready.” Stewart’s hand returned to her
knee and Emma could smell his kickin’ breath move closer to her face.
“Stop
the car.” Finally her senses returned. She sat up straight, and in doing so
knocked Stewart in the nose with the top of her head as he moved in for a kiss.
“Driver,
stop the car now.” Stewart held his nose and moaned about it being broken. She
hadn’t hit him that hard. He was just being a baby.
The
limousine pulled over to the side of the road and stopped. Emma opened the door
and got out as quickly as she could.
“Mr.
Rawleigh, there has been a misunderstanding. I am not on deaths door, and I am
certainly not going to marry you. If my mother said I was, she was mistaken. I
will not now, or ever consent to marry you.” With that she slammed the door in
his shocked face and started walking towards the bus stop. The limousine sped
away and that was fine with her.
She
had only gotten as far as the corner when a siren sounded behind her and a
police car screeched to a stop in front of her. Two police officers got out of
the car and walked towards her, “Ma’am, may we see some identification?”
“What?”
Emma’s heel hit a rock and she tilted precariously before she caught herself
and straighten back up.
“We
need to see your identification.” One officer repeated as they both surrounded
her and nodded to each other. It was obvious the perp was intoxicated. She
couldn’t even stand up.
Emma
reached for her bag and then realized she must have left it in Pawsy’s car.
“I’m sorry. I must have left my bag in the limousine.” She pasted her best
innocent smile on.
“Ma’am,
solicitation is against the law.” One of the officers said as he reached behind
his back.
“Solici…what?”
Emma couldn’t process what his intentions were, “No, no…” When the lightbulb
went off in her mind, she was so shocked, she couldn’t even defend herself.
They thought she was a prostitute?
“Put
your hands on the hood of the car ma’am and spread your legs.” The other
officer said as he spun her around facing the police cruiser.
“No,
you don’t understand. You have it all wrong.” Emma tried to turn around and
explain but a hand pushing on her back prevented her from moving.
“Ma’am
are you resisting arrest?” One officer asked just before Emma felt cold hard
steel touch her skin.
Before
Emma knew what was happening, she was handcuffed and sitting in the back of a
police cruiser with her head spinning. What had just happened?
CHAPTER
TWO
Leo
waited in his car across from the police station. His mark, Vito Ramone Vargas had
been picked up for questioning, and had called his number one to pick him up.
Leo had been working for the past week trying to find out who Vito’s supplier
was and how his drug shipments were getting in.
It
had been a while since Leo had been in the field and felt the rush of adrenalin
when working undercover. He missed that part of it. The part he didn’t miss was
being shot at, living in roach infested motels, and being away from his family
for months at a time. That was why he had started his own business. Now days, he
ran operations from the comfort of his desk, or war room.
This
job had come up suddenly and everyone else was already on another case. The
money was good but that wasn’t why he accepted. Eliminating a major trafficking
ring was all the incentive Leo had needed.
Leo
and his five hand-picked friends from his SEAL days were now partners in a top
secret security business. They were called in by governments and major
corporations all over the world to handle situations before they became
situations. Their mode of operation was to come in under the radar and leave
just as invisibly.
Leo
had finally gotten inside Vargas’ inner circle. Soon now he would be able to
supply his people with the name they needed, and Vitto, and his cronies would
be history. His eyes drifted to the front door as he reached into his duffle
bag, and pulled out a bottle of water. The waiting…he didn’t miss at all.
Leo
scratched his earlobe. The earrings were driving him crazy. How did women wear
them all the time? It had been years since he had worn an earring but he needed
to look the part. His wardrobe department had gone a bit overboard dressing
him.
His
phone vibrated, he smiled when he saw the name on the display. His mother had
no idea of the time zone he was in. By her time she was just settling in to
watch her favorite shows on television. “Hi Mamma.” His eyes kept watch on the
two large glass doors for Vito.
“Lorenzo,
what is this I hear, you no come to the family dinner on Sunday? Why do you
wanna make your Mamma cry? Your father just said, Lorenzo is working this
weekend. Working! Since when does my boy work on the Sunday. Your father, he
must be wrong. This is right, yes Lorenzo?”
Leo
smiled, his mom had lived in the United States for over forty years but she still
had a thick Italian accent, “I’m sorry but yes, I’m working this weekend.” Leo
scrunched down in his seat as two uniformed officers exited the building.
“But
why? I wanted you to meet Mrs. De Santos’ daughter. She is a lovely girl I know
you will be so happy to meet her. She would make a good wife Lorenzo and her
hips they are wide, she will have many babies. This I know.”
Leo
scrubbed his hand down his scruffy face before answering, “I’m sorry Mamma, but
I will be working.” He knew what that statement would mean to his mother, it
would be like waving a red flag in front of an angry bull, but he would be
lucky to wrap the assignment up within two weeks.
“What
will I tell Mrs. De Santos? I have already told her you will be here to meet
her daughter. They have made plans already.” Leo frowned, his mother switched
to Italian which was never a good sign.
“I
don’t need help finding a wife, Mamma.” His mother had been trying for years to
set him up with any and every marriageable age women in town.
“This
I do not believe. You never bring anyone home. I worry Lorenzo. I worry that
you will die and never know the happiness that your father and I have had,
sharing our lives with each other and with our children. That is what I want
for you.” He pinched the bridge of his nose, his mother had turned on the tear
works as well.
“I
know Mamma, and I want that too. But, I have to do this my way.” He said
softer, hoping she would understand and back off. It wasn’t like he wasn’t
trying to find a wife. Okay, so it was like he wasn’t trying to find a wife.
But what was the rush? He was only thirty four.
“When?”
She pressed him for an answer the tears mysteriously dried up, “You are not
even dating anyone. You need my help to find a nice young woman. Let me help
you. I will call Mrs. Amaya. She knows all the eligible young women…”
“No
Mamma,” Leo cut in. He needed to put a stop to her meddling before she
contacted Mrs. Amaya. Leo shivered at the thought. “I mean, that’s not
necessary. I am already seeing someone.”
“You
are?” He knew his mamma would pounce on that information, “Who? Is it someone
we know? When did this happen and you didn’t tell your Mamma? Lorenzo this is
wonderful, you have made your Mamma very happy. When will we get to meet her?”
“We
aaa, haven’t been dating long.” Two more police officers came out and got into
their squad card.
“But
you know she is the one?” His mom was probably already planning the wedding
dinner menu and decorating the church.
“Um,
yeah. She could be the one. So you don’t have to worry anymore Mamma.” He
looked to the heavens and held his breath. Luckily he didn’t see or hear any lightning
bolts.
“I
must meet her Lorenzo. Next Sunday, bring her to Sunday dinner with the
family.”
“Mom,
we just started dating. I can’t do that to her. She will never see me again.”
“Lorenzo,”
His mother scolded, “you do what your mother tells you to do. No argument. Next
Sunday. I will not invite the cousins. They have no manners. They act like they
were raised in a barn I always tell your father this.”
“Mamma,
I’ve got to go. I love you.”
“I
love you too my son. Next Sunday.”
Leo
disconnected the call and tossed his phone into the seat beside him and hit his
head over and over again on the steering wheel. What had he gotten himself into
now? How was he going to produce a girlfriend that didn’t exist in two weeks?
He
stopped pounding his head against the wheel, he could ask his secretary Shannon
to pretend to be his girlfriend. After all her husband Mitch wasn’t only his
business partner he was also his best friend. If he had a wife he would let
Mitch borrow her for Sunday dinner.
Leo
sat up straighter as the door of the police station opened. It was about time our
boy Vargas came out. Leo blinked his eyes and looked again. It wasn’t Vargas.
“Hello
beautiful.” Leo said to himself as he watched the tall leggy vision leave the building,
cross the street, and walk down the sidewalk, directly towards him. The closer
she came the better the view. He couldn’t decide. Was her hair brown or blonde?
Some pieces were a darker blonde or was it a light brown? And then some looked
like the sun had streaked parts almost white. All the different shades mixed
together made her hair come alive and glow in the darkness of the night as it
bounced around her shoulders.
Leo
gave up all pretense of watching for Vargas. He only had eyes for the bombshell
coming his way. Her black dress looked conservative at first glance, but the
closer she came the less he cared about Vargas slipping past him. The short, tight,
black, number showed off her bare shoulders, and arms to perfection. Her tanned
legs looked even longer in those ridiculously high heels.
But
oh what he wouldn’t give to see her in those heels…only those heels. The
handcuffs in his back pocket practically burned a hole through his pants
begging to be used. He could see her now, handcuffed to his bed with those
lethal heels and nothing but her creamy smooth skin in between.
Leo
kept his eyes on the lovely lady. She paused on the sidewalk. Her arms wrapped
around her waist as she shifted from foot to foot looking up and down the road
anxiously. He thought he saw her brush away a tear. Women’s tears were his
downfall. Before he could stop and talk himself out of it, Leo slammed the car
door and walked slowly towards her.
Hearing
someone approach Emma glanced towards the noise, and her beautiful blue eyes
widened in fear.
Leo
slowed his approach, he didn’t usually have that effect on the ladies but then
again he didn’t usually look like a biker gone bad either. His own Mamma
wouldn’t recognize him right now.
Emma’s
heart stopped when she saw the huge rough man walking towards her. All of the
news articles she had never heard or read about abductions raced through her
mind. She glanced across the street hoping to catch the attention of an officer
going in or out of the station. It seemed her luck was still holding out on her
tonight. There wasn’t a soul in sight.
She
nervously shifted her eyes back to him. He was close enough now for her to see
some of the intricate tattoo’s decorating his arms. There wasn’t an inch of
un-inked skin showing. She couldn’t help but wonder how long it took to cover
such a massive area. His biceps must measure a foot in circumference easily.
His dark gray t-shirt was pulled tightly across his chest, and she could see
more ink coming from under the collar and up onto his neck. He even had ink on
his right cheekbone. She couldn’t quite make it out, a star maybe or a tear?
Each
time his shaggy brown hair whipped in the breeze, Emma caught a flash of gold
hoop earrings. A menacing black skull cap was pulled down low on his forehead,
and his intense brown eyes were fixed directly on her. She knew where the
saying ‘deer in the headlights’ came from, because there was no way she could
break the trance his eyes had her under. She was incapable of turning around
and running back across the street to safety.
“I’m
sorry ma’am,” Leo said as he held his hands up, in what he hoped, was a
non-threating gesture. “I didn’t mean to frighten you. You just looked like you
needed help. Is everything alright?” Leo didn’t know how to assure her he meant
her no harm. Looking the way he did, and as late as it was, he really couldn’t
blame her for being suspicious. Her eyes kept darting from him to the police
station and then back to him.
“Back
up mister, I know karate and I’m not afraid to take you down.” Emma forced her
five foot four inch body, into at least, five foot eight and one quarter inches
of pure female terror in heels. She planted her heels shoulder width apart like
her karate instructor had taught her and balled her hands into tiny fists of
fury. Her only thought…why didn’t she go back for lesson number two.
Oh
please, he would love to be horizontal with her Leo thought, as he tried to
hide his smile at her weak attempt to intimidate him. She was a small thing and
even the thought of her taking him down was ridiculous and…exciting. “It’s
late. Someone like you shouldn’t be out this late in this area.”
“Someone
like me?” Emma repeated. Her chin went up and her entire posture changed from
one of combat to one of irritation and outrage.
Leo
could almost see the hairs on the back of her neck stand up she was so irate.
Once again he fought the smile that threatened. “Yes. Someone beautiful, like
you.”
“Are
you flirting with me?” Emma didn’t understand it. She should be terrified of
the monster man in front of her. But there was just something about…his eyes.
That was it. She saw no threat or danger in his eyes.
Leo
gave her what he hoped was his best smile before answering, “Well if you have
to ask I must not be doing it correctly. My name’s Leo.” He held out his hand
to shake but all she did was stare at his hand.
Emma
had never seen a hand as big as the one in front of her. She worked with some
huge guys, but the hand being held out to her was massive. He could probably
crush her throat with very little effort. The span of his hand would probably
reach all the way around her neck. She tilted her head to get a better look at
his fingers. They were long and lithe with neatly trimmed nails, which didn’t
really match the rest of him.
She
jumped when he cleared his throat. She felt her face heat and couldn’t believe
how rudely she had been staring. Finally, she he reached out to shake his hand
and marveled at how tiny her hand looked in contrast to his. When he enclosed
her hand into the warmth and strength of his, his heat spread through her body,
all the way to her most infrequently used girl parts.
“Emmma.”
She squeaked out, cleared her own throat and tried again. “I mean, my name is
Emma.” She said as she smiled into the most amused and gorgeous brown eyes she
had ever seen. They reminded her of the baby seals she had catalogued a few
years back. Mesmerizing. They really shouldn’t make her shiver inside, at least
not in a good way.
“It’s
nice to meet you Emma. Can I help you get somewhere?” Leo chanced taking a few
steps closer.
“No,
I mean, I do need to get somewhere but I can find my own way.” Emma watched him
warily. If she sprinted she could probably make it off the sidewalk before he
caught her.
“Are
you sure? I would be happy to see you home safely.” Leo saw her hesitancy and
once again he didn’t blame her. If any of his sisters or female cousins got
into a car late at night with a strange man, especially one as rough looking as
he was, they wouldn’t be able to sit for a week, because he would tan their
hides.
He
took his phone out and handed it to her. “Here, do you need to call someone to come
get you.”
Emma
looked at his cellphone. She had already called her friends from the police
station. They were still out celebrating their catch. She had left messages on
their phones. That only left…she grimaced at the thought, her parents. No way
would she call them to rescue her from the police station.
“No
thank you, I don’t have anyone to call that I haven’t already left messages
with.”
“Can
I call a taxi for you?”
That
would be nice, but she didn’t have her bag which meant she had no money to pay for
the cab. If she ever saw Pawsy again, she just may feed him to a shark! No, she
wouldn’t do that to a shark, Pawsy would probably give the shark indigestion.
“No
thank you, I’ll just wait here until my friends come.”
Leo
knew he was going to regret what he was about to do, but there was no way he
could leave her, “Here, take my phone, and call anyone in the contact list. Ask
them if it’s safe for me to take you home.”
Emma
glanced at his phone. She had one just like it, but in his hand it looked like a
toy phone. What choice did she have? The guys probably wouldn’t check their
phone till in the morning and she didn’t relish the idea of sitting outside for
the remainder of the evening. Was she crazy to think about doing as he asked? She
stretched her neck and looked up and down the road for a taxi but nobody was
out at this time of the night.
“Thank
you,” she took his phone and pulled up the contact list. Scrolling through she
found the one name she knew she could trust and swiped the arrow to place the
call.
Her
blue eyes met curious brown ones as she waited for the phone to ring. “Hello.”
A voice with a heavy accent said. If she hadn’t been watching Leo closely, she
would have missed the tiny flicker of fear that entered his eyes and then just
as quickly left.
“Umm,
yes ma’am my name is Emma Shelbrook and I’m calling for Leo.” She still
couldn’t make out the ink on his cheekbone.
“I
can see that, you are calling from his phone. Oh, is this his fidanzata? Emma,
ahh what a bellino name. His papa and I are so happy we will meet you on
Sunday. We have waited so long for our Lorenzo to bring a ragazza speciale home
to meet us. I must call his brothers and sisters, they will be so happy you are
coming to our home.”
“No,
ma’am. I mean…” Emma had to hold the phone away from her ear as the one sided
conversation continued at a higher octave. All Emma really knew was she was
excited about something special and she sounded like a proud mother. So her
son, whom she was looking at now, could be trusted to see her home safely.
However, he was looking a little green around the edges at the moment.
Emma
shrugged and handed the phone back to Leo, his mother still talking a mile a
minute.
“Mamma,”
Leo tried to interrupt again, he listened to his mother go on and on about
Sunday. He swallowed and closed his eyes. How was he ever going to get out of
it now? She thought she had actual proof his girlfriend existed. Now he not
only had to find a girlfriend, but her name had to be Emma.
Emma’s
eyes sparkled in humor as she watched the big bad man get taken down by his Mamma.
How cute was that? The fierce looking man in front of her called his mother, Mamma?
If she had any reservations left, the last of them just dissolved.
“Mamma,
I must go now. I love you too. I will try Mamma.” Leo hung up the phone and
waited for Emma’s reaction. He didn’t have long to wait.
“Lorenzo?”
Emma asked looking up at him through her lashes.
“Italian.”
Leo shrugged with his hands, and offered in response.
“Ahhh,
that explains it. I had no idea what your mother was saying half the time.”
“You’re
invited for Sunday dinner.” Leo said in defeat.
“Why
would your mother invite me?”
“Because,
you’re my girlfriend.” He explained.
“What?”
Emma couldn’t have heard him correctly.
“Listen,
can I explain in the car. Let me take you home.” Leo held out his hand again.
Emma hesitated only a
moment. The ridiculously buff and rough looking man in front of her would see
her home safely. Of that she had no doubt. How she knew that…she had no idea.
She placed her hand in his once more and felt a hum move through her. “Okay, let’s go.”
This may be my favorite book yet, and not just a because there's a Shannon in it. You've grabbed me with the characters right away, and I want to know more now!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shannon. If you want more, you need to give me suggestions. What you would like to see happen. Does she pretend to be his girlfriend or is there something else that could happen?
DeleteLiz - I hope it isn't too late. I posted this on last week's blog but wanted you to see it. Sorry - I'm a technical idiot but your stories are awesome! I love this idea.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, what about a shark tattoo? Right on her bum? Since she's a shark woman - wouldn't that be interesting? Okay - sorry again if this is too late. You've probably already written the next portion of the story. You're amazing! Keep it up!
You are in luck Mavis! I have not started writing chapter 3 yet. A tattoo, humm. On her bum? Got it. I will see what I can do. Thanks so much for your suggestion.
DeleteLiz, how is Emma going to deal with Leo when she has that Marcus jerk in her past? I mean, Marcus was cheating on her 2 months before their wedding with multiple women - that's just disgusting and wrong. How is Leo going to get Emma to trust him after that kind of discovery?
ReplyDeleteWell Rita, I didn't know about Marcus. Let's see, you want him to be a jerk and you want him to cheat on Emma before their wedding, which means you want her to be engaged to Marcus at one time. Multiple women? YIKES!
DeleteThis will be a fun challenge! YIPPEE!
Hey Lizabeth - what is Emma going to do when her mother finds out that she's seeing someone like Leo? I mean, I'm pretty sure that the woman is going to be upset but can you make it really good like in that Emma feels empowered?
ReplyDeleteActually, I won't give you advice on that one because I can't wait to see what happens - but if I had my way - I'd love to see Emma's mother's reaction when she sees her daughter with a guy who looks like a biker gang member.
You know what Lilly, I have been thinking about this as well. As for her mother's reaction. That should be a hoot, don't you think? Check back, hopefully I will have it ready to go on Sunday.
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